Jack/Claire - Constant

Okay -- this is Jack's POV, and it's also my first time writing Jack and he's a hard voice to pin down (he's got this whole internal monologue thing going). Therefore, any constructive criticism would really be welcome, and you don't even have to know Heroes all that well -- all you really need to know is that Claire's a girl who can't die. So any Torchwood/Jack fans who'd like to throw in their two cents on my characterization would really be appreciated.

Fandom: Torchwood/Heroes
Title: Constant
Author: iluvroadrunner6
Rating: FRT
Characters: Captain Jack Harkness/Claire Bennet
fic_variations Prompt: firsts (#1)
Content Warning: General spoilers for all aired episodes for Heroes.
Summary: Nevertheless, she shouldn’t have been there, yet there she was, sitting up on the desk that Ianto used to work behind, that countless men and women had worked behind since, all legs and blond hair, and not looking a day older than the last time he saw her, while he was sure he’d probably aged a little.
Author's Note: Set way post-canon. First time writing Jack, and he's decided that it's from his POV, therefore any constructive criticism is welcome.
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters of Heroes or Torchwood. They're owned by NBC and the BBC. However, any and all original characters are mine, so please do not use them without my permission.

( Constant )