Do research into the kind of tech that could make my ghost catching device work. ✓ Establish how my ghosts behave.
Finalize Becka's character arc a little more - right know I kind of have a workaholic angle, but I need to make hard choices on that front and maybe cut scenes I like. ✓ Make a decision on that Holly and Bryan chapter - either split up my daring duo or rework that portion of the book. ✓ Make a decision on the prologue. ✓ Pick the poison that murdered Orson.
Work on Becka's infodumps.
LINE EDIT (JULY-SEPT 2021):
Go through line by line to tighten language and trim for pacing.
Make sure my grammar is super squeaky clean.
Massage any bits that still need massaging.
Reread and decide if it needs another draft before sending it to Alison.
THE EMPATHY QUOTIENT EDIT LIST
LINE EDIT (JULY-SEPT 2021):