iluvroadrunner6: (maka)
Emily ([personal profile] iluvroadrunner6) wrote2006-08-30 02:46 pm

First Impressions

Fandom: CSI:NY
Title: First Impressions
Author: [livejournal.com profile] iluvroadrunner6
Rating: FRT
Pairing: Don Flack/Kaile Maka
[livejournal.com profile] coclaim100 Prompt: 040. Strangers
Content Warning: N/A
Summary: Maka's first day working with the crimelab
Author's Note: Re: Lilly Harper: Lilly is a character that I've been trying to get down on paper for sometime now. She's a CSI with the team pre-Aiden. She's not going to be that heavily involved, but she is in there, and I'm planning on doing something else with her and Danny. Also, this is kinda manic, so let me know if you can't follow it, and I will edit accordingly.
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters of CSI:NY. They're owned by CBS. But I do own Lilly, so please don't steal her.

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[identity profile] afteriwake.livejournal.com 2006-08-31 12:05 am (UTC)(link)
lol...that was fun to read. It's got an energy all it's own, but I could see it happening.

[identity profile] kinkapoodles.livejournal.com 2006-08-31 01:49 am (UTC)(link)
hmmm..apparently I'm reading your stories out of order. lol This was a good story. You really write well. Now...to resume my backward trek through your stories.

[identity profile] iluvroadrunner6.livejournal.com 2006-08-31 02:04 am (UTC)(link)
don't worry. i write nothing in order. i'm planning on posting a list eventually which has each of the sections in chronological order, but i haven't gotten around to it yet.

and thanks!

[identity profile] iluvroadrunner6.livejournal.com 2006-08-31 02:20 am (UTC)(link)
it was follow-able. good. i try to write things as i would see them happening, but sometimes the details get jumbled or things don't make very much sense. but this one worked out pretty well.

[identity profile] afteriwake.livejournal.com 2006-08-31 02:42 am (UTC)(link)
But you have to keep in mind, as a reader, how chaotic the place is in the first place. That makes how you wrote it much more believable (and, hence, easier to follow).

[identity profile] iluvroadrunner6.livejournal.com 2006-08-31 03:42 am (UTC)(link)
awesome.